But what if the topic sentence came at the end of the paragraph? And what if that paragraph described something from a story?
Here’s part of a paragraph from J. R. R. Tolkien’s The Hobbit. Notice the topic sentence at the end of the description:
There was no laughter or song or sound of harps, and the pride and hopes which had stirred in their hearts at the singing of old songs by the lake died away in the plodding gloom. . . . The land about them grew bleak and barren . . . . There was little grass, and before long there was neither bush nor tree, and only broken and blackened stumps to speak of ones long vanished. They were come to the Desolation of the Dragon, and they were come at the waning of the year.
See how the description is gloomy and dark, but we don’t really know where we are until Tolkien sums up his description by telling us that Bilbo and the dwarves have arrived at the Desolation of the Dragon in autumn, the time when everything is dying. This makes things seem more dangerous for the travelers; we feel they are in real trouble.
A topic sentence at the end of a paragraph is called a climactic topic sentence. Everything builds to that one sentence. It is the climax of the paragraph.
Now it’s your turn: Describe a place you like, can’t stand, or completely make up. Then sum it up with the topic sentence at the end of the description to tell where it is or what it is.
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